Beginner lettering

Hey guys.

Here's a sample of some lettering I've been working on. I would love some feedback!
I'm a beginner when it comes to designing letterforms, this is one of my first renders in illustrator.
If you have any tips or comments or woes, please share.

Cheers!

Comments

I like it.

hhp

@aishy: You’ll find you get more feedback if you post material like this on the Design or Critique boards.

i also like it ... good to go :)

even i also like the way it has been done thanks for your effort!!!!!
Ref: alloy steel flanges
alloy steel flanges

I love it! I wish I could see more of it