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Logo for a technology based start-up
Commented on Saturday, 3 July 2010 - 4:21am

The wings look strange.
The one closer to the viewer should be larger.
I'd also drop the stroke and keep working on the shape.
Definitively better than your first attempt but still not right.

Architecture firm logo
Commented on Thursday, 10 June 2010 - 5:05am

I love the idea. Subtle but smart. However it doesn't feel finished yet. I'd try different perspectives, different weights.
I don't know if it's only me but there's something about its weight that makes it fragile as it is.

logo
Commented on Saturday, 29 May 2010 - 1:48pm

"Due to the importance of having a good logo and multiple angle's on the design
I chose to entrust this to a group of people rather than 1 design-firm."

Dear God...

My portfolio
Commented on Saturday, 29 May 2010 - 8:31pm

The gradient works fine on my laptop mac screen. On the other hand it doesn't work that good on my pc screen.
On the logo, I like the transitions of different space images within the logo itself. However the "Z" needs some tweaks. I can read net...

My portfolio
Commented on Sunday, 30 May 2010 - 6:18am

Regarding the grid. I'd rather go with a 5 or 6 square column width and easily add more when you have more works. That'd look more professional than a variable layout as you have now.

Logo: Sktchy
Commented on Saturday, 29 May 2010 - 1:59pm

The name itself is hard to read / recognize. I don't think it makes a good combination with such fluid letterforms. Maybe little tweaks on the slant angle and letterforms contrast could make significant changes.

Type Battle 40 // Typophile's 10th Anniversary
Commented on Saturday, 17 April 2010 - 2:38pm

Here goes

Type Battle 40 // Typophile's 10th Anniversary
Commented on Tuesday, 20 April 2010 - 8:29am

2nd take:

"Community Websites" Project
Commented on Thursday, 30 July 2009 - 5:06am

Hello
Well, for a start, I don't see the need of having .co.ke on the website header itself, it's somewhat redundant.
For the typography I'm not that keen of it. However I lke the 2nd option more.

initial blind feedback on logo please!
Commented on Tuesday, 9 June 2009 - 3:04am

I don't know what this is for, but try to simplify even more.
Instead of a T you should try to make the stem of the tree an arm + hand instead.
Therefore removing all the other hands from the leaves.

Networks & It logo
Commented on Monday, 25 May 2009 - 7:59pm

Thanks Paul.

I'll take a look into that tomorrow. Tho not sure if you noticed but theres 3 more options to the left where the symbol's a lil bit scaled down and in different positions.

Thanks once again

Networks & It logo
Commented on Wednesday, 27 May 2009 - 6:52am

Sorry for not posting an update yesterday but Im full of work.
Prolly won't have the time until the weekend. However by then I'll try to get it done since its a friend's work.

Anyway, I have few doubts / questions. I like the type...

Networks & It logo
Commented on Thursday, 28 May 2009 - 3:30am

hahaha
Well its not an awesome name but theres nothing I can do about that.

Trying to modernize a logo
Commented on Tuesday, 26 May 2009 - 5:20am

I like the last Fi pair. I don't like what you'r doing with the D that much. It kinda starts ressembling an upper case A chopped off or something strange.

You should try to curve it more instead.

lanzallamas
Commented on Tuesday, 26 May 2009 - 4:34pm

Not saying this sort of geometric designi is the direction you should take. But its kinda easier with real examples.
I'd like to see this sort of iconization (if thats even a word) or simplification on the work you're doing. Its got potencial....

lanzallamas
Commented on Thursday, 28 May 2009 - 6:05pm

I like that draft jakes.
Even tho its just a quickie it doesn't resemble a lion anymore and it should not loose that.
Well but that'd be just a small tweak on the face and it'd be solved anyway.

Font Management Software options
Commented on Wednesday, 20 May 2009 - 3:38am

Thanks, gonna give it a try.

David

Ligature & Typeface Pairing Choice
Commented on Sunday, 31 August 2008 - 6:57pm

Dunno why but I read Jim

My own brand
Commented on Thursday, 28 August 2008 - 7:12pm

If you're thinking of registering your own mark, why not the ® symbol as the fish's eye. :=)
Might not work at all, but it would be fun

Type and Design related stuff in NY
Commented on Tuesday, 19 August 2008 - 2:55pm

Wow, thanks for the info.
Im not missing the Gutenberg Bibles exhibition. Thats for sure :=)

The TDC ones, I been at their website and it seem the exhibition will only reopen in october. Am I wrong?

Dave

Suggestions for Justice and order typeface
Commented on Wednesday, 12 March 2008 - 4:38am

Hi Florian,

Thanks for the suggestion. I like Legato.
But I'd appreciate a few more suggestions so I can have a bunch to choose from before buying : )

Thanks once again
Dave

Suggestions for Justice and order typeface
Commented on Wednesday, 12 March 2008 - 5:09am

Sure, It's for a logo restyling.
The original logo was an heraldic sort of emblem which Im turning into a simplified crest.
Originally the type was inside the emblem itself. However I'm removing it from the inside and placing it next to...

Type influenced furniture, buildings or objects
Commented on Saturday, 1 March 2008 - 8:06am

Ive recently seen somewhere while browsing the web, or a book (can't remember precisely where it was) some images of type inspired furniture.

I've already browsed throw these threads before, but Im looking more for interior designers /...

Type influenced furniture, buildings or objects
Commented on Saturday, 1 March 2008 - 10:40am

Thanks Nick and Alessandro, thats the sort of thing I'm looking for.
Loved the creative Bookshelves. Thats the sort of thing I've seen before.

Type influenced furniture, buildings or objects
Commented on Saturday, 1 March 2008 - 8:09pm

Found this article on Aiga's website.
Its from 2006 but might be interesting for anyone else looking for info on the same subject.