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Logo for handmade leather bag brand. WIP
Commented on Tuesday, 3 April 2012 - 4:58pm

Hi Herb

Of course I did some research on google images for reference. Still I'am looking for a minimalistic, geometric but still somewhat organic approach.

Thanks for your feedback anyway. I will explore some more possibilities.

Logo for handmade leather bag brand. WIP
Commented on Wednesday, 4 April 2012 - 10:52am

Hi Luma,

I haven't thought of it that way, but it is the right market.

Today I've planned working on it, so hopefully I can give you guys an update soon.

Logo for handmade leather bag brand. WIP
Commented on Sunday, 25 March 2012 - 9:20am

@HVB
Thanks I will play with the wings some more.

@riccard0
More like DIN 17 is a good suggestion. I will look into it!

@Mar_bie
I will try with a smaller logotype.

Tanks for now guys. I'am very busy this week...

Logo for a mens survival kit
Commented on Wednesday, 28 March 2012 - 3:20pm

Constructing your own geometric logotype could also give it a more manly feel. I would use black and orange I think.

What exactly is in the survival kit?

Logo for a mens survival kit
Commented on Friday, 27 April 2012 - 4:32pm

Your welcome. Is that your final solution?

Logo for a mens survival kit
Commented on Friday, 23 March 2012 - 7:37pm

You might wanna have a look at http://losttype.com/browse/

It might be a cool concept if the tail of the Q is an arrow pointend to the right. 'Directing you to the way out.'

Just a thought.

Logo for a mens survival kit
Commented on Thursday, 12 April 2012 - 11:27am

Maybe this is a cool idea.

RES[Q]

Tried it with Veneer. http://www.myfonts.com/fonts/yellow-design/veneer/

Just a thought.

Logo for a mens survival kit
Commented on Thursday, 12 April 2012 - 11:27am

Maybe this is a cool idea.

RES[Q]

Tried it with Veneer. http://www.myfonts.com/fonts/yellow-design/veneer/

Just a thought.

blackletter logo for clove cigarette project
Commented on Monday, 30 July 2012 - 7:42am

MADE IN HELL

Haha

Do your worst. :)
Commented on Thursday, 22 March 2012 - 6:34pm

"..interested to see how things turn out." Ye me too.

I would say find a way to make it work with the two words. It can be done for sure.

I like your type choices very much. Maybe do some more mock ups? We will feedback you all the way...

Kerning on custom lettering for logo
Commented on Sunday, 8 January 2012 - 3:35pm

I like your logo.

Actually V E looks a bit tight to me. Kern it reading only the top half of the word.

Kerning on custom lettering for logo
Commented on Tuesday, 10 January 2012 - 6:07pm

When people read, they actually only read the top half of words. So in order for your logotype to be as legible as possible you should have a nice rhythm (optical spacing) between the top half of your letters.

It's a trick I learnt from...

Kerning on custom lettering for logo
Commented on Tuesday, 10 January 2012 - 6:16pm

The looser the spacing the more space you have to optically align letters. That's a given.

But I think in this case the looser spacing also fits the brand better.

Kerning on custom lettering for logo
Commented on Wednesday, 11 January 2012 - 11:22am

It seems to work out in this case. Maybe some pro's can give their opinion about the subject?

Anyway I like the outcome. The leaven symbol is also great!

Feedback for web/print design company logotype
Commented on Friday, 6 July 2012 - 3:33pm

I'm with apankrat.

Second. Why not go for a more geometric font? There are a few helvetica / din crossovers. Or maybe even go further. I would like riccard0's afrobeat with a little bit of tinkering.

You've got to find a way to make the...

"Ming" Logotype Feedback?
Commented on Sunday, 8 January 2012 - 3:13pm

I just dont like the design concept. It's abstract, and it's not. You know what I mean?

I would try to make it even more abstract.

Jazz pianist logo
Commented on Monday, 5 December 2011 - 8:08am

This will give you some inspiration:

http://gokudo.co.jp/Record/BlueNote1/index.htm

Company Logo Critique
Commented on Tuesday, 22 November 2011 - 1:57pm

Yes its clean

Yes its approachable

But it lacks personality and does not communicate IT or whatever they are good at

Script logo
Commented on Friday, 14 October 2011 - 8:46am

I agree with the capital s.

I don't agree with riccard0 about the rhythm. I think your piece conveys a kind of calmness that I suspect is suitable for the client.

Great job!

Personal Business Logo
Commented on Friday, 7 October 2011 - 2:48pm

Addict +pill = negative connotation (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Connotation)

In my opinion you should find a solution that communicates you are a design addict in a positive way.

Personal Business Logo
Commented on Monday, 10 October 2011 - 1:27pm

Ok agreed. Maybe.

Maybe a horizontal pill. DAS punched out.

Full name loose.

Logotype development - critiques required
Commented on Wednesday, 9 November 2011 - 10:23am

Maybe ascenders just a tiny bit larger.

You might also like what I did to the d.

Quick sketch:

Logotype development - critiques required
Commented on Wednesday, 9 November 2011 - 10:25am

Hmm I like my idea about the d.

I made ascenders a bit taller, but that I dont like I think.

E looks much better in my opinion!

(the migthy grid also get in my way sometimes haha)

Logotype development - critiques required
Commented on Tuesday, 22 November 2011 - 1:35pm

Keep me posted! :-)

Logotype development - critiques required
Commented on Tuesday, 4 October 2011 - 12:47pm

It is always a difficult decision to choose between a geometric concept and possible optical corrections.

(you understand what I mean?)

• Maybe you could try to make the ascender a bit less tall.
• Maybe you could make the...